Thread:Hellbent Revenge/@comment-4539185-20120908051413/@comment-5424817-20120908204145

Actually, rereading it, and looking at other walkthroughs online, they all use the second-person perspective as well, using "you"'s and such, and rereading mine, I can't see how I could reword it at the cost of sound repetitive. If you have any advice or suggestions, I'd be happy to hear it, I would even encourage you to take a paragraph I did and rewrite it accordingly, just to show me what I could do.